
Was it possible to leash a demon?Β Boreas considered the likelihood as he strode to the command tent, but every idea crumbled under scrutiny.Β If there was, he hadnβt yet discovered the means.
There had to be some way to bend Fercos to his will.
He buried those considerations under other thoughts while hesitating before the closed flap.Β The brute inside claimed to provide council regarding the legion Boreas commanded in these wild lands far from the civilized city of Rome.Β It was vexing to permit Fercos this much influence over the soldiers, but sometimes seizing power required deference to a mightier strength … temporarily.
One of these days he would no longer request permission to enter his own tent.Β βAre you present?β
The voice from inside was low and gravelly.Β βCome inside.β
Boreas pushed past the flap into the dimmer interior.Β Only a couple of paces before him, Fercos sat upon a bearskin and grasped a roasted goose in clawed hands.Β At first glance the fiend appeared as a tall and brawny man, especially when he concealed his deformities, but it was his custom to remove his gloves while dining.
Other meats and some bread, with a few knives scattered in their midst, were arranged on a tanned pelt between them.Β Miscellaneous supplies, including spare armor and swords, were stored behind the brute.
Fercos bit into the breast of his fare with teeth like a wolfβs, and lowered the bird as his gaze locked on Boreas.
Those swirling pupils were too unsettling to gaze upon, so he focused instead on Fercosβs bearded chin.Β Months ago, when Boreas allowed this creature to gain access to his mind, he had to regard those otherworldly eyes.Β The experience had left him feeling drained.
But it would all be worth it in the end.
βWe have intelligence on the traitorβs current location.βΒ Boreasβs attention diverted to the half dozen wine flasks beside Fercos before darting back to his dark beard flecked with gray.Β βHeβs struck up a trade with another backwoods village.Β They call it….β Local pronunciation annoyed him.Β βGoonree.β
βThe lad is still with him?β
βDefinitely.Β The mountainous region presents its usual challenges, but if I divide the troops so we can surround the villageββ
βNo.βΒ Fercos set the cooked goose on the hide.
βBut we can either detain him so you can kill the lad, or you can engage him and weβll execute the upstart.β
βFool.βΒ Fercos leaned forward, and each following word proceeded with deliberation, his Latin accented by a language from yet some other far-flung region.Β βHave you forgotten the traitor is my kith?Β You will never hold him.β
Understanding this bizarre dynamic among demons was like seining for minnows with bare hands.Β βHis companion is as vulnerable to our weapons as any man.β
βDo not underestimate the traitor as you underestimate me.β
Boreas almost met his gaze and a light tremor rippled through his core.Β Was Fercos aware of what heβd been thinking as he approached the tent?Β When he agreed to allow the creature access to his mind, heβd believed that entry would be limited to sharing information that would help reach their goal.Β Considering how Fercos had to initiate that action, Boreas hadnβt considered the link would make it this easy to spy upon him.
Could that communication work both ways?
Perhaps some flattery would play in his favor.Β βConsidering your power, I thought you would be able to subdue the traitor.Β I confess, I still donβt understand why you donβt just mow down the local peasants and take control of these lands since you could do so with ease.β
Fercos seemed to study him, and his mouth twisted into a toothy smile that brought to mind the gleeful sneer of a soldier dragging a woman captured as booty into his tent.
βI take control?Β You know nothing of my kind, general, and you are incapable of learning.Β You do not desire to see me in power.Β You only plot how to bring glory to yourself through me, to place yourself in authority and live off the backs of others.β
βWe have the same goals.β
βOnly in your imagination.βΒ Fercosβs hands clenched into fists.
The knives on the pelt sprang, spinning, into the air.Β And as Boreas stepped back, his sword flew from its scabbard.Β He reached for its grip, but the edge whipped toward him.Β His hand snatched back a second too late, and the point struck his smallest finger hard enough to draw blood.
The other swords stored behind Fercos flew into the air to join the knives and Boreasβs own weapon in a dancing whirlwind around him.Β They spun and jabbed as they whisked about, slicing the air with whooshing and clanging.Β He didnβt dare move lest some body part slip within range of their momentum, not even to pinch his bleeding digit.
βLet me make myself clear.βΒ Fercos raised his hands and uncurled those clawed fingers.Β βYou are here to serve me.Β I care not for the trifles you yearn for, and you can have them.Β But you will do as I tell you and spare me your pitiful strategies.β
βI thought you wanted the lad dead, and possibly the same for the traitor.β
βI will act upon my terms, not the traitorβs.Β All I require of you now is to keep me updated on his whereabouts.Β Do nothing unless I tell you.Β And banish the foolish notion you would ever be able to keep me on a leash.β
The chill that crept through Boreas accentuated his frozen stance.Β To be honest, he never really trusted this creature … and it was no surprise that distrust would be mutual.
βIf that is what you wish.βΒ The words seemed to hang in his throat.
βThen you may take your leave.βΒ Fercosβs hands clenched again.
The knives slammed down to the pelt, and the spare swords hurled back to their sheaths.Β Boreasβs weapon shoved into its scabbard with a force that tugged on his belt.
Fercos picked up the goose and resumed eating.
Boreas bowed slightly as he grumbled, βYes, sir.βΒ He turned and left the tent.
He retreated at least forty strides before contemplating recent events.Β Infernal creature.Β It was apparent Fercosβs mind-reading ability was limited to a certain range, otherwise Boreas would never need to report to him.Β In the future he would be more wary of the fiendβs proximity when plotting how to best use Fercos to his advantage.
Despite his sneaky allyβs claim, Boreas would not submit completely.Β The stories heβd grown up, regaling him of deeds by gods and monsters, also admitted they were fraught with their own shortcomings.Β This bizarre fixation Fercos held for a traitor and his ward was further evidence these beings were not as fully powerful as they claimed, and one could take advantage of any weakness they tried to hide.
Demons or gods, it made no difference.Β After all, they werenβt so different from mankind.
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Love the interplay Abe. You trust me but I donβt trust you kind of thing a military mind in command might well play with without thinking. Not quite sure whoβs in control here either haha.
Mind you Iβm not sure either of these two do! Both want something from the other and neither seems to want to be the underdog taking orders. Throw in the probability of one sided mind reading and itβs a recipe for command infrastructure damage. Whoβs to say this demon is not a double agent keeping his βkithβ one step ahead.
If you canβt leash a demon why would you trust it?
Seems to me there must be a payback owed on its βuseβ at some point. Not sure Iβd like to be Boreas when that comes round.
I mean, do these demons hand around solo or are they all networked psychically? An army holds a lot of souls maybe?
Great stuff though. One off or part of the world build?
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Thank you, and yes, this is an addition to the Malach and Cadwalader story universe, whose dynamic is quite different from that of Boreas and Fercos! Neither of these two can be trusted. As for your question about do the ‘demons’ work solo or networked, the answer is a bit complicated. I’ve alluded they’ve been around for ages, have extensive lifespans, and despise humanity – so you could say they tend to work solo toward a united cause.
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Thought so. I di love rich worlds too. The demon thing is a good foil too. So many ways to interpret how they might function. Its why I asked! Mind you, as per Joshua’s aliens there’s a lot to ponder about how humans are mucking things up. I guess disliking us could be a reasonable assumption at first contact
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Our complexity – you’ve got to take the good with the bad – is part of what makes us interesting for stories! π
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Love your descriptions of Fercos. I can picture him clearly as he gnaws on his roast goose (and wonder how long until Boreas’ goose is cooked! LOL) The knife and sword bit was fantastic. I love that kind of stuff!
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Thank you! Although I might have to warn you that your thinking may be as twisted as mine since you picked up on the cooked goose insinuation. π The swirling cutlery was a fun description to write.
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This is a part of Malach’s world? Oh, how deliciously fascinating! I’m on pins and needles for more.
I found it funny how Boreas thinks that his deference to a demon is temporary. I think humans lie to themselves about that all the time (demons can be many things).
‘Goonre’ is an interesting name for a place. *chuckles* I wonder if that’s a hint or just a random name.
The ending in which you reveal the possibility of limited distance for mind investigation answered 2 questions throughout the story. 1. How can Boreas not know that Fercos knows about his plans to leash him? Does he want to get killed? 2. Why does the demon need the general for simple information? I’m intrigued.
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Thank you – and yes, we humans are very good at lying to ourselves! The name ‘Goonree’ is a phonetic spelling of general Welsh pronunciation, and is meant as a hint (or reminder) of where these characters are lurking. As always, there’s a chance any of them can turn up again in a future prompt.
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What a great opening line!
It’s great to delve back into your writing once more, A.E.
I love the description of the brute’s deformities and claws and how he eats. You give us just enough information to get the imagination spinning. He’s nicely shrouded in mystery! Also, the description of his sneer as something like a soldier with a captured woman was deeply unsettlingβperfect imagery for a monster.
I vaguely remember your story with a demon and a young boy, but I forget the details. Is this part of that same universe?
Excellent as ever, A.E.!
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Thank you, and yes, this is part of that story universe you vaguely remember. These are actually some of the ‘bad guys’ those two characters you recall will have to contend with someday. I’m not methodical with it as I was with the Deuce the IMP stories, but occasionally this story line provides some fodder for some of the prompts!
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A world I am mostly new to.π
I like the demonic atmosphere redolent with menace and power throughout most of the narrative, but what I truly applaud is the twist at the end; Boreas may be mortal and Fercos may have the whip hand when they are close, but he has obviously underestimated ‘this mortal’.
A reminder that ‘we’ are a dangerous and tricky species. The story leaves you feeling that Fercos might rue his choice of tool.
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Thank you! Every now and then it’s interesting to write from the bad guy’s POV. You usually can’t have a story without them π
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That’s true. Either that or a morally ambiguous type.
They are fun to work withπ.
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Yes, the morally ambiguous will keep you guessing!
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I never know what they are going to do from chapter to chapter and I’m apparently the writer! π€¨
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Usually it’s great when characters take on a life of their own … but occasionally they can seem to get in the way. π Sort of a reminder there can be a bit of pantser in those of us who consider ourselves plotters!
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I gave up on plotting and pantsed it all the way…..The Characters knew what they were doingπ
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You go with what works!
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