
Part Four
βStop it!βΒ Eva clenched her fists as she faced Dyvolik.Β βHe wasnβt attacking you!β
The dozen cricket creatures still leaned toward her and Copper, their papery wings rustling.Β Her companionβs struggle to breathe made him wheeze, and wisps of blue mist rippled around him, only to evaporate.
βYes, he did.βΒ Dyvolik smirked as he unfolded his arms and held them out.Β βHe challenged my proposition.Β That is an attack on my authority.β
βAuthority?βΒ She glared at him.Β βIs that how you plan on benefiting β that weβll be so grateful to you for giving us a potion of magical ability that weβll submit to your will?β
Dyvolikβs smirk darkened.Β βSuch a shame he corrupted you before I could complete my plans.Β Oh well, if you donβt cooperate, Iβll find someone who will.β
She turned back to Copper and grasped his elbow, and tried to pull him farther from the creatures.Β His hands were still pressed below his neck, and the light breeze she noticed when the assault began continued to ripple against her face.Β His gaze rolled toward her, but she seemed as unable to move him as he was to move himself.
βYouβre killing him!β
βYes, thatβs the punishment for defying me.β
Evaβs heart thumped against her chest as Copperβs face began turning a shade of crimson that palely reflected the hue of his vest.Β Sheβd known this realigner for less than an hour, and still didnβt entirely trust him, but Dyvolikβs spell convinced her which of the two was more dangerous.
Copper had enlisted her aid, but what good was she in a duel of enchantments?Β The potion Dyvolik dispersed last night was supposed to give her a hexerβs ability.Β Heβd claimed if she vividly imagined an outcome, it would happen.
But what could she do that would stop him?Β The blue mist around Copper that kept fading must be evidence he was trying to change into β something less vulnerable to β being choked?Β Should she try to help him breathe?
Except … it wasnβt choking.Β The soft breeze brushed across her again, and she looked back at the trembling, monstrous crickets.Β They were the ones affecting him.Β It was as though they were pulling his very breath from his lungs.Β But how?Β They were only Dyvolikβs pawns.
Pawns…. Β Was Dyvolik, like Copper, limited to performing magic within a certain range?Β Was it possible the greater variety of enchantments he performed didnβt include remoter influence?
Did he hex the crickets not only into gruesome creatures, but also as a relay to leapfrog the spell upon Copper?
She imagined the crickets turning back into miniscule insects.
Nothing changed.Β Of course, Copper had already said those creatures were protected by a shield spell.Β And even if they werenβt, was it possible the potion he convinced her to drink back in the shack had neutralized Dyvolikβs concoction of magical ability?Β Eva glanced back at her companion, whose face was taking on a purple tinge.
Her clothes rustled, turning back into the skirt and blouse sheβd donned earlier that morning.Β The nearby piles of fruit resumed being sassafras trees, their branches more tattered than before.
If she correctly understood Dyvolikβs comment about punishment, it could well be her turn after he murdered Copper.
Jordan.
An eerie sensation seeped through Evaβs body.Β Her quest to earn money that would help pay for her brotherβs medical treatment had ultimately brought her here.Β If Dyvolikβs plan succeeded, Jordan might lose all chance for recovery.
Even if she tried to flee, that wouldnβt help.Β Dyvolik would only catch up and finish the job.Β And if Copper died, she was as good as snuffed….
Her companion had promised he would see to Jordanβs care if anything happened to her.Β And if anybody stood a chance against Dyvolik, it was Copper.
Evaβs eyes burned.Β Would the potion she drank actually benefit her?Β Copper said only it would offer some protection β and bring out qualities in her, whatever that meant.
If she wanted Jordan to be healed, there was only one thing she could do.
Her throat tightened as Eva faced the crickets and stepped directly in front of Copper.
Her gasp was like the time years ago when she fell from a tree and got the wind knocked out of her.Β Like then, she was unable to draw in breath.Β The breeze no longer brushed her, but seemed to flutter from her very being.
Dyvolikβs laugh was as welcome as fingernails scraping a chalkboard.Β βFoolish girl!Β You canβt stop a spell that way!β
And then warmth swelled from beneath her ribcage.Β It burst from her like a lightning bolt, which would have made her gasp, but she was unable to utter anything.Β The white beam crashed into the crickets, and even as a protest roared from Dyvolik, the bolt ricocheted into his chest.
The beam vanished.Β In that instant, Eva audibly sucked in air as she sank to one knee.Β The creatures disintegrated into scores of regular crickets.Β And Dyvolik began screeching as he thrashed about, but his feet remained planted on the ground.
He pointed toward the scrambling crickets.Β βThis isnβt over!β
The insects whirled into the air as though caught up in a dust devil β and changed into sharp spikes.Β Eva squeaked and twisted to one side, arms thrown up, as they hurled toward her.Β
Blue mist spun past her, swirling like a small cyclone.Β It collided with the spikes, and they were sucked into its vortex.Β Then it careened toward Dyvolik and hurled the spikes toward him.
Their assailant shouted and held out his hands.Β The spikes scattered around him as though theyβd stuck an invisible dome, and the blue whirlwind plunged into the ground like a flock of pelicans diving into an ocean.
Dyvolik lowered his hands and glanced around, apparently missing Copperβs descent.Β βContrary realigner!β
Eva, still gasping for breath, staggered to her feet.
The whirlwind exploded from the ground underneath Dyvolik, enveloping him.Β Through the streaking mist she could make out his silver robes whipping and twisting around him.Β Was it her imagination, or were they twirling into ropes?
Dyvolik cursed as he struggled, which became more like twitching as the ropey robes bound around him like a spiderβs thread restraining an entangled bug.Β The whirlwind pulled to one side, and he tottered for a couple of seconds before dropping to the ground.
The swirling mist slowed and congealed, and Copper once again appeared as a young man.Β He also staggered, and his dark hair was more disheveled than ever.Β The blue coat hung askew from his shoulders and the matching trousers were twisted, like somebody had tried to pull them off.Β Dirt stained his clothes and face.
Eva stumbled over to him.Β Copper was breathing heavily, and she wasnβt sure if it was from lingering effects of his recent exertion, Dyvolikβs attack, or a combination of the two.
She managed to gasp, βAre you all right?β
He dipped his chin once.Β βSquirmy dirty grubs!Β Are you no worse for wear?β
βI … feel quite normal.βΒ She drew a deeper breath while adjusting the cloak pinned around her neck, and looked down at Dyvolik.Β The robes were also coiled around his mouth, preventing speech.Β βIs it over?β
βMostly.βΒ Copper shuddered, a few wisps of mist appeared and vanished, and his clothing and hair got back into shape although there was still a smudge on his left cheek.Β βI need to finish incarcerating him, but your role is complete.Β And, may I say, you were absolutely brilliant.β
She stared at him.Β βI didnβt really do anything … I just stepped in front of you, and … was what happened because of the potion you gave me?β
That familiar smile touched his lips.Β βThereβs a reason I needed somebody keen of mind and selfless of heart.Β Your willingness to accept harm in order to save another gave the potion its potency.Β Because your intention was directly opposite of Dyvolikβs, it neutralized his enchantments and rebounded some aspects upon him.β
βEven the shield spell?β
βEven.β
She frowned.Β βBut why didnβt you just use a potion like that on yourself?β
Dyvolik gave a muffled grunt, and Copper flicked an index finger.Β The rope around his prisonerβs mouth tightened.
βNot while Mommy and Daddy are talking.βΒ Then his attention returned to her.Β βThe sacrifice had to be genuine, or it wouldnβt have had the power to break the enchantments, much less the shield spell.Β My prior knowledge was a hindrance.β
She squinted at him.Β βI had to not know how it would work in order for it to work?β
βThatβs why I had to be vague about it extracting certain qualities from you.βΒ He smirked as he held up one hand and flexed the digits.Β βThereβs much more to magic than just wiggling fingers.β
βSo … you counted on me to save you?βΒ She studied him.Β βThat seems like a big gamble.β
βNot me.Β Weβd just met.Β But I could tell youβd do anything to help your brother.βΒ His grin broadened.Β βAnd I had a backup plan in case Iβd misjudged you.β
βSo your promise to help Jordan if something happened to me was all part of your scheme?β
His smile softened.Β βA promise I intended to keep, but not only because it maintained the strength of my enchantments.Β Speaking of your brother….βΒ He tucked his thumbs into the lower pockets of the vest.Β βDid you know that over a century ago, that shack we met in was the home of a miser?β
Eva frowned.Β βHow does that matter?β
βWhen he built it, he hid a chest of gold coins beneath a floorboard of the back room.β
She stared at him for a couple of seconds.Β βYou mean I can pry back a board to find it?β
βUnnecessary.Β When I changed the shack back to its actual appearance after my promise to you, I left that floorboard out of place.Β Consider it payment for your services.β
Her jaw dropped and heart fluttered.Β βI … I donβt know how to thank you.Β I donβt believe I can thank you enough.β
His smile broadened.Β βYou more than earned it.Β I couldnβt have made this capture without you.β
βIβll forever be grateful.Β And … Copper?β
βYes, Miss Eva?β
βIt … turned out to be a pleasure meeting you.Β Before today, I didnβt trust hexers.Β Any of them.Β At all.β
He nodded.Β βBoth our peoples are guilty of judging each other on the misbehavior of certain bad eggs.Β Meeting you has been a delight for me as well.βΒ He bowed to her.Β βAnd with your leave, Iβll take Dyvolik to his destination.β
He evaporated into a swirling blue mist that drifted down and around Dyvolik.Β Eva stepped back as it thickened, lifting the prisoner atop it while he rolled face down.Β The color shifted to bronze as the mist coalesced, and a palomino horse took form.Β Dyvolik was draped across the steedβs back … and a smudge remained on Copperβs left jaw.
βTake care of yourself, Miss Eva, and may your brother heal quickly.β
βThank you again.β
He took off at a canter, and she raised one hand in farewell as he traveled across the pasture and slipped into the woods near the top of the next hill.Β Eva glanced down as she turned back toward the village, and spied a few crickets scrambling under leaves and into tufts of grass.
Of course … magic that defied truth was temporary.Β The effects were lasting, but nothing could remain changed into something it wasnβt.Β Her clothes and the sassafras trees had changed back when Copper was under duress, no longer manipulating their appearance.Β A moved floorboard, however, was still a board.Β It was merely in a different place.
The warmth from the sun above cut through the earlier chill, and Eva pushed back her cloak as she walked to the trail that would lead her back to the ramshackle cottage.
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Here is my submission to this month’s #BlogBattle
The prompt word for this round is Extract.Β This concludes the longer short story, and if you just now discovered it, you can check out Part One and Part Two and Part Three.Β And be sure to catch all the other submissions!
[…] βWhat Abides Withinβ by A. E. Branson […]
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Loving this Abe, but is there an element of finale at the end? Is this tale ending or merely chapter one?
My money was on Eva coming good and that she would rapidly decide Copper was the safer bet. Anyone flowed by a plague of giant bugs has issues.
Good writing narrative flow too. I just said the same on Joshuas too. So many styles have evolved here it’s very impressive. They do say practice makes perfect and avoids the WIP.
Looking forward to your piece next month already
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Thank you! As to whether this is a finale, that is a good question. The world and characters are interesting enough to me that they continue to lurk in the back of my mind. Maybe in future years a revisit in a novel might be in order.
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True enough but youβve got a chapter at least now haha. I do think itβs a fascinating sideline though so we shall see if Copper comes knocking at some point
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Like Roger likes to point out, sometimes these characters just do what they want!
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A very exciting read Abe, you built up the tension at a steady and remorseless pace, quite the crescendo.
In the previous chapter you’d laid out the suggestion that Dyvolik was a piece of work; I agree with Gary on the use of crickets in such a manner. His come down was nicely described and very satisfying to read.
It was particularly gratifying to read just why the magic worked through Eva so well and at that particular time, a story with a good moral ending.
Another adventure involving Eva would be welcome
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Thank you! Who knows, a revisit to this world may be necessary at some time. One can’t help but kind of feel sorry for the crickets in this scenario … maybe I should have put a disclaimer at the end that no crickets were harmed in the writing of this story!
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π, I got the impression they were all scuttling off and complaining to each other about ‘one that one mean guy Dyvolik,’
A revisit would be a good idea, never waste a good world-build I say.
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We’ll see what the characters decide! π
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Of course!
They, are the ones who have the final say.π
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LOL!
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