
βThis isnβt a cut and dry murder.βΒ Gildar folded his arms as his attention shifted from the hillside below them to his companion rummaging through a dun, canvas knapsack.
Mordrad frowned as he glanced up from angling for a snack.Β βTell me again why youβre here.β
Gildar resisted the impulse to roll his eyes.Β Yes, Mordrad claimed decades of experience on these justice quests, but it wasnβt like Gildar stumbled out from under a burdock leaf only yesterday.
Instead, he smirked while returning Mordradβs gaze.Β βTo offer a different perspective on our investigation.β
βWrong.βΒ The older quester pulled something, fist-sized and wrapped in brown paper, from the bag.Β βOur job is to determine the truth.Β Your perspective doesnβt change any of that.β
As his mentor unwrapped a candied apple and then bit into it, Gildar caught himself contemplating the bulge around Mordradβs middle.Β The transmigrator consistently snacked on sweetened treats throughout the five weeks theyβd been working together β and before.Β Did packing extra pounds make it any harder for Mordrad to translocate himself from one area into another?
Never mind, there was the more important question concerning the trampled slope below them to address.
βBallin had been doing business with Jed for years.βΒ Gildar hooked his thumbs into the pockets of the tan, leather vest worn over his light cotton shirt.Β βWhy would Jed suddenly decide to shoot Ballinβs son in the first place?β
Mordrad swallowed.Β βYou canβt trust humans.Β They can lie without consequences, so in order to make it look like an accident, he shot the lad.β
βCorrection, that lad accidentally shot himself.β
Mordradβs eyes narrowed.Β βI just said it wasnβt an accident.β
βPlaiton may be a child, but he didnβt shoot himself on purpose.βΒ Gildar arched an eyebrow as he tilted his head.
βJed told him the pistol wasnβt loaded, much less primed and cocked.Β He lied, and tricked the boy into shooting himself.β
Gildar frowned as he pursed his lips.Β βPlaiton is nine years old, and that pistol was actually half-cocked when we examined it.Β But he said he had an urge to look into the barrel, even as both Ballin and Jed hollered at him to stop.β
βChildren do stupid things, especially if Jed told him it wasnβt loaded.βΒ Mordrad took another bite from the apple.Β βAnd Jed couldβve easily pulled the hammer into the safety position, with Plaiton never noticing, before we arrived.β
The boyβs impulse to gaze into the caplock pistol and squeeze the trigger wasnβt the only detail that nibbled at Gildarβs skepticism.Β It was an action that only lasted a couple of seconds, yet the lad would feel the effects for the rest of his life.
On a certain level, Plaiton was probably blaming himself for the end of his fatherβs life.Β But the community would blame Jed, which put the human trader at risk of facing a shorter life.
βWhy?Β Thatβs an awfully elaborate plan.βΒ Gildar folded his arms as he leveled his gaze at Mordrad.Β βKill off one of your more lucrative trading partners by giving his son a loaded pistol, figure heβll shoot himself and not anybody else, and know for certain Ballin will sacrifice himself to save the boyβs life.β
The transmigrator swallowed and glared back.Β βEven humans comprehend parental instincts.Β And that plan would be all the more elaborate for somebody besides Jed to pull off.β
Now he locked his gaze with Mordradβs.Β βJed didnβt know Ballin was an empath.β
βAnother lie.βΒ Mordrad shrugged, and a subtle smile curved his lips as the glare faded.Β βYou donβt understand humans very well, do you?β
His mentorβs change in attitude was a clear signal, meant to remind him yet again that Gildar was only an apprentice.Β The elder questerβs decades of experience should trounce any analytical concerns voiced by a greenhorn.
Except Gildar had more experience with humans than Mordrad realized … but this was no time to regale someone with childhood exploits.
The transmigratorβs attitude miffed him, but heβd learned the best way to rattle his mentorβs smugness. Β Gildar broke into an indulgent grin.
βI do understand humans canβt make anybody act against his will.Β Thatβs why Plaiton might have been enchanted.β
Mordradβs smile dropped.Β His complexion reddened as his eyes bugged slightly.
βNobody can make someone act against his will!βΒ The words burst out like stench from a rotten egg thrown against a rock.Β βThatβs the dumbest idea Iβve ever heard!β
βThen youβd better brace yourself for what I have to say next.βΒ Gildar was probably enjoying Mordradβs reaction more than he should.
βIβm not listening to this manure!βΒ Mordrad turned away and snapped into the apple.
βPlaiton acted on an impulse he canβt explain.Β If somebody has figured out a way to influence the actions of others, itβs a high priority for us to find out who it is.β
Mordrad spun back toward him and raised a hand, shaking the half-eaten fruit.Β βHave you been grazing locoweed?Β Jed met with Ballin to ostensibly barter goods, caused Plaiton to shoot himself in the face, and Ballin died from bearing his sonβs wound onto himself.Β Case closed!β
βAnd what was Jedβs motive?β
βPrejudice, pure and simple.β
Gildar arched an eyebrow.Β βAgainst an associate heβs traded with for years?β
βItβs a fact you canβt trust humans.βΒ Mordrad chomped another bite, and then hurled the core into a nearby patch of the forest that haphazardly carpeted the hillsides.
Gildar muttered, βYour aim is decidedly off.β
The transmigrator glared again.Β βWhatβs that supposed to mean?β
βIβm standing right here.βΒ He appreciated phrases with double meanings.
βDonβt give me any good ideas.βΒ Mordrad shoved the crumpled paper into a side pocket of his knapsack before shouldering the bundle.Β βWeβll report our findings to the magistracy, and leave Jed to the fate he made for himself.β
Except Jed might not have earned that fate.Β And why did the boy shoot himself?
Gildarβs attention returned to the slope below them.Β The shin-high grass, trampled where the ground leveled off, betrayed where Jed had halted his wagon to meet with Ballin and Plaiton earlier today.Β It was also evidence how Gildar and Mordrad investigated the murder site after they were notified of what happened.
After speaking with Jed and Plaiton, the questers then allowed the trader to leave with his wagon of wares, while they returned the boy and his fatherβs body to the family home.
βIβm going to examine the scene again.βΒ His gaze remained on the disturbed site.
βIβd say youβre wasting your time, except you could use the practice.βΒ Mordrad squinted.Β βBut as soon as youβre done, change into a booby or cuckoo or whatever tickles your fancy, and meet me back at the tribune.β
Gildar nodded.Β βRight.Β When Iβm done.β
The older man stared at him for a few seconds, muttered something Gildar couldnβt catch, and flicked his right wrist.Β With a subdued pop, he vanished from sight.
Gildar shrugged off his own knapsack and held it in one hand.Β βBut not before Iβm done.β
He descended the slope, and dropped the pack to the ground when he neared the grass still leaning to one side from being rolled on by wagon wheels.Β Upon raising his hands to his chest and pressing the palms together, a tan mist swirled around him for an instant.
When it evaporated, he stood on all fours like any proper hound dog and thrust his muzzle into the supple blades.
Although his sense of smell could never match that of a real hound, it was still improved over what his nose could pick up in natural form.Β Gildar crept between the parallel tracks and picked up the odor of horse … of course.
He moseyed closer to where the wagon had stopped, and before reaching the precise location picked up his own scent, as recognizable as that of the equine.Β Hmm, hopefully that wasnβt an incrimination of his personal hygiene….
The smell of a second person near his own trail had to be Mordrad.Β Except for aromas that uniquely stood out or he was well acquainted with, Gildar couldnβt always identify to whom an odor belonged.
But he did recognize different scents.Β The smell of a third person was likely Jed, since it was near his and Mordradβs trails.Β Gildar crept closer to where the wagon had stood.
There was no mistaking the essence of blood.Β He hesitated over it, allowing its complexities to permeate his olfactory glands so he could confirm the fourth person.Β This was where Ballin had fallen, giving his life in exchange for his sonβs, transferring the wound that would have killed the boy to himself.
A slight chill rippled through Gildar.Β What parent who had ever lost a child wouldnβt have yearned to perform the same act as Ballin?Β Gildar wasnβt married yet, although he did have a sweetheart … and the prospect of family in the future made the weight of this morningβs event even heavier.
He crept toward another patch of blood a couple of paces from the first.Β After pondering the complexities, he confirmed this was where Plaiton, the fifth person, had fallen, but then was rescued by his father before the bullet actually killed him.
Ballin wouldβve had to act swiftly, with no hesitation.Β And that was exactly what he did.
Gildar reached where the wagon had stood.Β Everybody was accounted for, but maybe he could pick up the aroma of something theyβd missed, perhaps not where it was supposed to be.
Wait β what was that?
He questioned himself at first, considering the possibility that heβd lost the tally of everything heβd been tracking.Β This odor shouldnβt be here … had he forgotten an important detail from either Jedβs or Plaitonβs testimony?
βTeeny biting fleas!βΒ Perhaps it was because his thoughts had wandered into a somber arena that the discovery unsettled him, spurring the hackles on the back of his neck to spring up.
Why had he picked up the scent of a sixth person?
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Here is my contribution to this month’s #BlogBattle, and the word this round is Sacrifice. You probably figured out this is the first part to a longer short story, so here we go again….
Be sure to check out the other stories that have been submitted!
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This is captivating abe. Starting off with what seems to be a regular investigation by two ‘cops’ in a possible ‘Western’ scenario steadily transforms into something else. I like the way ‘human’ is being used to indicate the two current central characters may not be from the same species, and the possibility that they are now in charge. The titles being used are intriguing too
The concept of transferring Life is deftly eased in, now we know we are ‘Somewhere Else’.
I’m looking forward to reading where this goes.
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Thank you! Playing around in a magical world can be quite entertaining … and also challenging as the rules for the world get set up. But you’d know all about that!
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A world build can be great fun, I found the best rule of thumb was to parallel with the world we live in and the ‘There’s a lot we do not know’ theme, leaves room for the narrative.
I look forward Abe to learning some more abut yoursπ
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Ditto on approaching the world build. Besides the material matters (geography and technological) it’s very stimulating to consider beliefs, attitudes, and culture. Great way to work in symbolism while telling a tale that’s (hopefully) compelling.
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The narrative and the build will hopefully interact on each other, the nature of the world impacting on the way the narrative unfolds.
Have a rewarding and interesting journey Abe.
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Thanks again – and same to you!
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Such a simple concept – a murder investigation – but so many complexities. The two investigators are obviously different. I enjoyed their dynamic and their characters individually. The father/son situation is intriguing. And of course the 6th stranger. Lots of questions. Eager to see the continuation.
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Thank you! Characters with contrasting personalities always seem to add a little spark, and I noticed this month we both had a vibe for putting nine-year-olds in peril!
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Heheheh, indeed!
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Simple becomes less so in true Conan Doyle style. Especially at the end, where the quizzical ending is more astonishment at the discovery of a sixth person that only Gildar has knowledge of. I do like Mordrad though. “Mordrad swallowed. βYou canβt trust humans. They can lie without consequences.” The trait that any off-world species would sum us up with very little hesitation before deciding we are a danger in waiting for the cosmos.
Really like this one Abe.
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Thank you! As Gildar goes about solving this mystery I intend to sprinkle in not just how his people and humans are different, but also the ways they are the same – and probably in more ways than either society would like to admit!
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Reading this to catch up before reading this month’s part three. Loving the murder mystery in a magical fantasy land!
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Thank you! I thought a murder mystery/fantasy smashup needed more publicity. π
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