
Previously:Β In a world where mundane Humans coexist with magical Beings, Gildar, something of a detective-in-training, is on a quest to discover if a Human trader named Jed actually killed Ballin with a caplock pistol.Β At least thatβs what Gildarβs mentor, Mordrad, claims happened.Β Β After changing his appearance to look like a hound, Gildar discovers the scent of a sixth person who was never accounted for on a percussion cap that didnβt spark.
Gildar tracks Jed to the traderβs home in town, and learns the pistol in question has been delivered to a customer who claimed he never ordered nor paid for it β but kept it anyway.Β Unable to examine the pistol further, Gildar convinces Jed to accompany him to Ballinβs funeral that night.Β Because Gildar is a realigner who can also change the appearance of nearby surroundings, he plans to disguise them and question the participants.
At the funeral he meets Kareece, Ballinβs widow, and her cousin by marriage, Vervale.Β Mordrad is also in attendance, and threatens to end Gildarβs career as a quester.Β Gildar then speaks to Plaiton, Ballinβs nine-year-old son, and learns that Vervale had spoken to the boy about pistols the night before.
Plaiton tells Gildar that Vervale told him to look into a pistolβs barrel to tell if itβs loaded, and also gave the boy a raspberry whip, with instructions not to eat it until after breakfast.Β Gildar tries to question Vervale, but Mordrad intervenes.Β Because a Beingβs enchantments wonβt work after he lies, Gildar resorts to asking Vervale if he murdered Ballin.Β Vervale hurls a fireball at him and flees, and Gildar pursues him even though that leaves Jed in a vulnerable predicament.
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Clouds obscured much of the moonlight as Gildar raced into the meadow.Β Spooked horses shuffled against their hobbles as he tried to discern which way Vervale had fled.Β Gildar halted and strained to hear above thumping hooves and vexed snuffles.
After a few seconds, one set of drumming hooves erupted from the far end of the cedar grove.Β The steed bore down on him, and Gildar had to dodge again as Vervale spurred the beast into a faster gallop through the clearing.
βSo thatβs how you want to play!βΒ Gildar hissed as tan mist swirled around him, and then he spread his arms and changed into an enormous owl.
He leaped, and flapped toward the sky to soar over Vervale on the galloping horse.
Taking the form of an owl helped him to see a little better and observe his target unnoticed.Β And capturing the pyrotant demanded some consideration.
Elementals were considered the most powerful of all the arcane Beings, partly because they were the only ones who could outright kill an opponent with their enchantments.Β Gildar could realign Jed to appear like a pile of dismembered bones.Β But except for the emotional trauma that would undoubtedly cause, the trader would reassume his natural state unharmed.
Pyrotants could make their enemies spontaneously combust, and nobody recovered from that.
Luckily there was a tradeoff when enchantments were that strong.Β Gildar could realign himself and his immediate surroundings all day, but Elementals exhausted themselves after too many manifestations β or if they cast that enchantment massive enough to cause an opponent to burst into flame.
Gildar wasnβt a pile of smoldering ash on the floor right now because that would have left Vervale physically weak and unable to continue enchantments.Β Fireballs like the one he did hurl were limited in number of casts.
If Gildar could draw out the majority of Vervaleβs power, the pyrotant would make a compliant prisoner.Β He would have to provoke his quarry into summoning more fire.
And as far as Gildar could tell, he was the only target Vervale might risk overextending himself for.
βYou really want to do this for a living?β Gildar muttered just before diving toward the horse and rider.
It was no surprise Vervale didnβt hear his approach.Β Gildar struck him hard with feet curled like fists to avoid shredding the pyrotantβs flesh with his talons.Β The blow knocked Vervale forward over the steedβs neck, but he also swatted with flaming fingers toward Gildar.
Gildar veered to one side, but the fireball brushed his wings.Β The stench of singed feathers assailed his nostrils as he flipped upside down and crashed into grass and pebbles.
The feathers had offered scant protection from the blaze and abrasions, but his limbs and shoulders still stung. Gildar sprang to his feet.
Flight was not as much of an advantage now as speed and strength would be.Β The mist swirled around him again, and he lunged forward as a brown and brawny, and somewhat smoky, bear.
If the horse hadnβt been galloping at full speed before, it probably was now with the realization a bruin was pursuing it.Β Odds were Vervale glanced back to see what form Gildar assumed this time.Β At least he didnβt cast anymore fireballs, so Gildar drew closer and alongside the fleeing beast.
He snapped the cuff of Vervaleβs trousers between his teeth and slammed to a halt.
The horse whinnied and Vervale shrieked some curse as the pyrotant was ripped from the saddle.Β Gildar thrust out his arms to catch him β and got fire flung into his face for the effort.
So Vervale hit the ground hard as Gildar swatted his paws against his muzzle.Β But his whole head and back were burning, so he released the pyrotant and rolled on the ground for several seconds while rubbing his arms against his crown.
His eyes stung and watered, and pain throbbed throughout much of his body.Β The putrid stench of burned hair didnβt help as his attention returned to Vervale a few paces away.
The clouds must have parted to allow more moonlight.Β The pyrotant lay on his left side, wheezing as he struggled to breathe.Β Gildar gritted his teeth against the pulsing agony that jolted through him with each step as he approached.
But halfway to Vervale, the pyrotant hurled a firewall toward him.
Gildar realigned instantly into a pile of mud β which added to his agony.Β Changing form that quickly was akin to receiving a hard slap throughout his core, while taking a few seconds to alter appearance was more like a gentle stroke.
The wave of fire seared him as it swept over.Β His soggy form offered the best protection yet, but didnβt negate the sensation of heat.Β The flames fizzled into nothingness behind him, although smoke rose from the grass and steam from Gildar.
At least he could take a few seconds to change back to his normal self.Β βYouβd better be outta fuel, Vervale,β he panted while mist, steam, and smoke swirled around him.Β βCause if you spark again, Iβm gonna turn the ground beneath you into a sewage ditch.β
Vervale muttered back something incomprehensible.Β After that last, impressive enchantment, he did seem tapped out, and Gildar was able to finish limping over to him.
More pain shot through his singed arms as he shrugged off his leather vest, which was as charred and ragged as the rest of his clothes.Β He realigned it into handcuffs, and rolled Vervale to his stomach to cuff the pyrotantβs hands behind him.
An unmistakable pop behind him made Gildarβs thumping heart skip a beat.Β He stiffly turned to see Mordrad standing about five paces away.
Better not make any sudden accusations.Β βWhere have you been?β
βSeveral places.βΒ Mordradβs gaze was unflinching.Β βFirst, I made sure Jed was relatively safe, then I had to migrate a few times to catch up to you.βΒ His expression hardened as he studied Gildar.Β βI know that look.Β No, I did not have anything to do with Ballinβs murder.β
He vanished with a pop, and then immediately reappeared beside Gildar and Vervale.
His gaze leveled on Gildar.Β βSatisfied?β
βFor the moment, but weβll have to finish this conversation later.Β How is Jed?β
βAppreciative of Kareece.Β She morphed into a briar patch that surrounded him, and told everybody he wasnβt up for grabs.Β Seems to me since youβre pretty unpresentable right now, I should haul Vervale in for custody and you look into making sure Jed gets home all right.β
That offer made Gildarβs stomach clench.Β He wished his doubts didnβt linger, and they must have been betrayed in his expression.Β Mordrad frowned again.
The transmigrator then rolled his eyes.Β βFor the love of….Β Iβll take Vervale to the tribune.βΒ He popped out of sight, and reappeared on the other side of them.Β βI am not doing that again.β
Something about Mordradβs annoyance always amused Gildar, which maybe he should contemplate someday.Β βThen weβll meet back at your place?β
βAnd hash things out then.βΒ Mordrad pulled handcuffs from the pocket of his coat.Β βI presume you improvised again?β
Gildar retrieved his handcuffs that he realigned back into the vest, and Mordrad placed one foot on Vervaleβs shoulder so that their prisoner would transmigrate with him when he engaged the enchantment.Β Then he hesitated, sniffed audibly, and tilted his head toward Gildar.Β βDo I smell bacon?β
At least the levity made their interaction feel a bit more normal.Β βIβd rather be compared to a ham.β
*****
βWhy did you try to impede my investigation?βΒ Gildar looked over the mug of tea he held as he studied his mentor.Β The beverage was a welcomed treat after washing up, tending his burns, and changing into clean clothes.
Soft morning sunlight shone from the nearby window onto the table, and Mordrad had informed him what was learned from Vervaleβs first interrogation.
The transmigrator shrugged as he gazed into his own drink.Β βWhen youβve been a justice quester for as long as I have, you see lots of inhumane treatment Humans do to Beings.β
It wasnβt as precise an answer as Gildar was looking for, but at least he was able to analyze it.Β βYou decided Jed was guilty because heβs Human?βΒ He leaned forward.Β βOr you didnβt care if he was innocent because heβs Human?β
βYouβre probably closer with the second question.βΒ Mordradβs vagueness suggested he hadnβt thought through his own actions.
βAnd were you fine with a Being getting away with murder, or were you purposefully protecting Vervale?β
βI didnβt suspect Vervale at first.βΒ The transmigrator looked up.Β βBut after our discussion on the hillside, I migrated to his place for more confections.Β He was gone, of course, to help Kareece prepare for the funeral.β
βOf course?Β A cousin by marriage doesnβt normally assume that role.β
βExactly.Β And I thought again about the halfcocked pistol, and that Vervale had the right enchantment to make it fire.”
Gildar leaned forward.Β βHe was at Ballinβs the night before, and gave Plaiton a raspberry whip.Β He told the boy not to eat it until after breakfast, just before Ballin and Plaiton headed out to meet Jed.Β Vervale also talked about pistols, and that you look down the barrel to determine whether or not itβs loaded.β
Mordrad frowned.Β βAre those two things supposed to be related?β
βMaybe.Β Since Iβm the outsider to this community, I donβt know Vervale well enough to confirm he might be able to concoct a consumable potion that could influence somebody already prone to suggestion.βΒ His gaze locked on Mordradβs.Β βBut you might know.β
βConsumable potions?Β Sounds like youβve been eating some pretty strange weeds, yourself.β
βSounds like when Jed was camped out with his wagon, Vervale crept in while he slept and took the pistol out of the box.Β He armed it, but didnβt know you have to pull the hammer all the way back to make it fire.Β He tailed Jed the next day, and hid in the trees to watch his plan unfold.β
Mordradβs brow furrowed deeper.Β βBut Plaiton picked up the pistol.β
βExactly.Β And when Plaiton shot himself β because of a form of hypnotic suggestion β Vervale knew Ballin the empath would take the wound onto himself to save his son.βΒ Gildar leaned against the back of his chair.Β βWhat Iβm still shaky on is why.β
Mordrad rolled the mug between his hands.Β βAfter his wife died, Vervale spent more time at Ballinβs.Β He wasnβt just sweet on Kareece, however.Β If he could combine his confectionary with her tailoring, theyβd become quite well off.β
Gildar nodded.Β βThat makes sense.β
βBut your potion theory doesnβt.β
βIf Vervale isnβt the one who figured out how to make influential potions, somebody else has.βΒ Gildar frowned.Β βAnd if he wonβt say where he got it, weβll have to seek out that person.βΒ He regarded Mordrad pensively.Β βIs this your long way of telling me you didnβt want to lose your supplier of confections?β
The transmigrator shrugged again.Β βI suppose I wanted to prove my suspicion about him wrong.β
The pit of Gildarβs stomach trembled.Β In the past day Mordrad had threatened to get him barred from becoming a quester, but now Mordradβs conduct bordered on making the transmigrator unfit for that duty.Β Had the roles been reversed?Β Should Gildar report this transgression to the tribune?
He would never call his apprenticeship with Mordrad amiable, yet this curmudgeon had been an effective mentor.Β It was unsettling to contemplate Mordrad being unceremoniously dismissed after so many years of service.
Mordrad took a sip before speaking.Β βIβm getting too old and fat for this.Β Too many hazards with this vocation.Β Time to let a younger man take over … unless youβve been burned too many times on this quest.β
The light smile that curled Gildarβs lips reflected his relief that this time, for once, he wouldnβt have to choose the harder path.
He raised his mug.Β βCall me a glutton for punishment.β
The End
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Hereβs my submission for #BlogBattle, and the word this month is Provoke.Β Donβt miss out on the other contributions, as well!
If you missed the preceding segments to this conclusion, Part One or Part Two or Part Three or Part Four can be found at these links.
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Gildar would make a good Elemental assassin as he thinks like a hunter wrt, drawing power from the elemental. That is very fascinating stuff, Abe. It’s a shame BB is only once a month, haha.
Loving the interactions and plot arc. It seems to me you have a diverse world-building going on, with each piece opening new doors and leads to follow.
I like the end part, too, with self-reflective ageing catching up with Mordrad. I had a similar point with the late Lord Cresswell. Although that arc took me in a very unexpected direction in Prison of Ice, which I’m working on now.
Happy Christmas and next year’s prompts are scheduled. I also have a cunning plan for the following year too.
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Thank you! By the time I got to the conclusion, it seemed obvious there was more story than could really fit in this venue, but glad it works out. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you, too, and it will be interesting to see what plan lies ahead!
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Often works out like that Abe. Still, gives material in waiting for the next prompt π
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To misquote Descartes, ‘I am, therefore I think.’ π
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[…] βRapid Fireβ by A. E. Branson […]
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Firstly Abe. Fine choice of illustration as a heading. Truly set the scene.
The action was well paced Vervale and Gildar trading blows, the speed and fluidity of Gildar illustrating he had the upper hand through his composure under pressure, even when taking knocks.
Thanks to the few astute statements and words you injected in the last episode Mordrad’s appearance and siding with Gildar was never truly a given.
I liked the back and forth of the conversation at the end as well, although Mordrad has given Gildar his support, the reader feels the two of them are not wholly settled with each other, which considering the tensions in the previous episodes, is how things should be, considering this is obviously a world of tensions. The line “you see lots of inhumane treatment Humans do to Beings.β indicates no one is really on top here, it’s still uneasy.
An interesting world Abe and plenty of scope for further visits.
An excellent series.
In conclusion- Wishing you a Happy Christmas.
Roger
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Thank you! Yes, the Humans and Beings (i.e. human beings) are not so different from each other as some of them tend to think. Nobody is ‘on top’ and interaction tends to range from tentative to hostile. And here’s wishing you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
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Lots of potential in that world build Abe.
Wishing you a Happy Holiday too, and all the best for 2024!
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Thanks again and same to you!
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Excellent ending, A.E.! I really like this world; I could read so much more of it.
I really love how honourable Gildar is, from avoiding shredding him with the eagle’s claws, to trying to catch him, to threatening him with a sewage ditch in return for an honest-to-goodness FIREWALL. What a good guy!
You also cracked me up a few times, with the Smokey the Bear reference and the emotional trauma of being turned into a pile of bones!
I’m unsure how I feel about Mordrad. He seemed like he was really involved for a moment, there. I think Gildar has a pretty tough decision on his hands, if his mentor doesn’t decide on retirement first!
Great stuff, as ever.
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Thank you! This was fun to write, including slipping in a couple of ‘this world’ references just for the wink. Part of Mordrad’s role was muddying the waters when I had limited characters to make into suspects, but I’m glad he was more complex than that.
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